In phonics this week we have been studying the 'oo' sound. Write a paragraph using as many 'oo' sound words as you can. Remember the 'oo' sound can be made in a number of ways and try to use as many different ways as you can. This week's word list and scaffold text will help you. Post your text as a comment.
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My friend is cool how gos to are school.HE bort me some cool shampoo.
ReplyDeleteOne day I was going on a cruise.I was wearing my best suit.I went to pack my suitcase with some shampoo,toothpaste and some suitable clothes.Sometimes I get a sore throat so I packed some soothing throat sweets.I got into the car and drove to the harbour.I got onto the big boat and it started to get dark,then I saw the moonlight.I sat on the wooden chair and watched the sky,I felt a bit of movement the boat was sailing away and we were all so excited,looking forward to our adventure.
ReplyDeleteThis is the story about me at school.It was morning and i didn't want to get up so my mum shook me and i still didn't didn't make any movement my mum said, "get up" and i said,"why should i" and i said she was cruel.I wore clothes that were suitable insted of my pajamas.I went down stairs and got my breakfast.Then i noticed that my mum was packing the suitcase and i said, "were are we going" and she replied, "On a cruise twomorrow." So i went to school and my friend said she was being bullied and i said, "they shouldn't do that its horrible yes it is they give me an attitude. "It's a group they got shampoo and poured it over me and it went in my eyes."It was sore."she said at the weekend that she went on a canoe and it was fun.so it was was the end of the day and i went home and my dad was in his suit because he was just home from work.So my friend was stopped being bullied and we went on our cruise and it was fun because when we stopped at islands i under stood their language and it was fun!
ReplyDeleteA group of children listened to soothing music as they began to bake a pudding. Half of the children shook the flour while the other half sat and listened on the pouffe. The teacher said they should listen carefully as there is room for improvement. Everyone understood what was involved in making the pudding and really enjoyed this task.
ReplyDeleteI fooled my friend and I said I am sorry and I won't do it again.I bought him some shampoo.I got him some shoes.MY friend has a little poodle.
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ReplyDeleteWhen we go on our trip to Shannaghmore, we will have to bring our suitcases packed with our clothes, shampoo and toothpaste. While there I hope we can canoe on the lake and maybe take the long route around the forest. A moonlight stroll on the beach would be nice. I might choose to do rock-climbing where I could improve my mountaineering skills.
Once apon a time there was a cruel sailor looking for old man Jenkins gold but there was another sailor looking for the gold so it is a race against time. The bad sailor's boat was a big stong boat and the other sailor's boat was wooden.It all started at moonlight and a sailors boat got attacked by the most deadly fish of all, the krackin and all you could see of the boat was parts of a canoe and wood.When the the good sailor was hearing this he said "oh no one of my sailors was on that cruise".Then a man said "who wants a free sample of toothpaste?" Then the good sailor said "if I were you I would sell shampoo."Then a dirty man said "I wish I had a clean suit". Then a part of the army said "Get off the habour now you pirate!"Then the good sailor said "what I`m not a pirate? "The army man said "prove it." The sailor said "I`ll give you proof all right." Then he brought him to his boat and the army man set him free. "Here`s old man Jenkin`s gold." The sailor said "thanks" the army man said "I see some movement." A robber said "nuts he's got me." The army man said " get back here!" Then the robber tripped and knocked him self out and they lived happily ever after but the bad sailor didn`t poor guy.
ReplyDeleteOne night a witch was flying past the moon on her broom. She had to go to her house to go too the loo to do a big poo. Then she flew on her broom and saw a cow in a field. She shouted "BOO" and the cow went moo. Then she went to a house and she saw a boy in bed with a tooth under his pillow. She climbed in the window and took his tooth and she put it in her boot. The boy woke up and he said "who took my tooth!!". When she got home to her house called Doom Castle she took off her boot to get the tooth and put the tooth in her gum. Then she had soup with a spoon for tea.
ReplyDeleteWhen I was at the X Factor I got into the final. The judges said I had a lot of movement and my performance was an improvement. I shook with nerves then the loud speaker said that I had won. The girl I was against had an attitude and said that she was better. The prize was a cruise for a week. I went home happy and got out my suitcase. I had to choose put in it. I put shampoo, toothpaste, and a fancy suit and had the best cruise ever!
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I went to buy shampoo in boots and I didn't know which one to choose.So I bought the fruitful one.So I went and shook it and there was nothing in it.Then I took it back the shop and the woman at the till had an attitude.The woman at the other till understood what she ment and it was suitable to get another one.By the time she got out it was moonlight.
ReplyDeleteone day I woke up in the morning and thought why dont we go on a cruise.so I went to ask my mum and she said ok I just need to find when is suitable for us to go.My teacher understood that i would be off for a week or to.My mum came up and said we cant go on a cruise. i was shooked.i went off with an attitude.Later on my mum said she will try to find a cruise and i was aloud to choose were to go on the cruise to.She had found a cruise and we went on it.It was good fun because my best friend was with me.The route to the boat was an improvement from the last time we went on a cruise.We were on the cruise when we had forgot our toothpaste but luckily my best friend brought some toothpaste.But on sunday i had to go home. When i got home i was still white and not tanned.I went to school and people didnt believe i went on a cruise so i brought in some pictures for proof then they believed me.I had a big bruise on my leg but i dont know how it got there it was gone the next week .it was good fun.
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