In phonics this week we have been studying the 'oo' sound.
Write a paragraph using as many 'oo' sound words as you can.
Remember the 'oo' sound can be made in a number of ways
and try to use as many different ways as you can.
This week's word list and scaffold text will help you.
Post your text as a comment (4TBs).
one time i was in a boat fishing with my uncle when i went home at night i went to my smooth bed the next morning i saw a random goose i my street i went outside too my friends house whene i came outside with my friend i said that the simpsons movie was very good i liked the boomb bit i said i want to go home i said because i need to have my diner i went home i got my diner after i went to the park with my mum i saw an ice-cream man he asked me do you want chocolate i said no can you let me choose thien i saw a man i a nice black suit he saw movement in the bushes i went home i wached tv i had my supper thien i went to have a shower i put shampoo on my hand and but it on my head after i brushed my teeth i stood up for five more min thien i went to bed and my mum went to the end...
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time there lived a cruel old witch. Every morning she would get up and brush her teeth, but she had no toothbrush or toothpaste so she used shampoo as toothpaste and her crude wrinkly finger as a toothbrush. This witch lived in a wooden house that had no electricity so it was only lit by the sun and the moon. The witch was not a human but she acted like one. The thing that you should know about this witch was that she had a big tattoo on her shoulder, it looked like a bruise but it was really a button. With this button she could communicate with all the other witches in the world. She would press the button and choose which one to talk to. This group of witches understood that they could not tell anyone their secret, but I know and now so do you.
ReplyDeleteThis morning I had woken up I looked at the time and realised I was late for school but when I got there school was closed my friend walked by I asked him why is school closed he said sorry I cant talk right now I am late for football I went home checked the calendar and it was not teusday it was saturday.
ReplyDeleteOne day I went to tesco to buy some chocolate pudding and some shampoo, when I was walking to the till I fell and blood began to ooze from my leg.When I got home my mum put a soothing dressing on it to stop it from leaving a bruise.
ReplyDeleteI went on a cruise for my summer holidays and took my suitcase. Inside my suitcase I choose to bring suitable clothes.In my dad's suitcase there was a suit,shampoo and toothpaste.During the cruise I understood the route we were taking.People have the attitude that the movement on a cruise is very rough but the "proof was in the pudding" and I found the movement very soothing.
ReplyDeleteonce apon a time a wee old woman went on a cruise to the carrabain .She had to bring shampoo and toothpaste. The man in the suit had to bring her across in the canoe. sho had to choose what room she would sleep in. There were police standing around the hole ship with bullet proof coats on. There was a man with a bruise on his forehead . There was people being cruel to each other. she thought she was going to be one of them. she had to empty all here belongings out toothpaste and shampoo. Then she brought her suitcase into the room. she put her feet up on the pouffe.Suddenly the wooden bed broke in half she was hurt really hurt"help! help!" she shouted "What is going on " said the manger. She had to go to hostipal. 2 weeks later. There was bad news the woman had died. The money for her cruise went to the hospital that she died in. The very sad END
ReplyDeleteOne day I couldn't choose suitable boots.I undersood that I couldn't have a tatoo as well as a new toothpaste and a suitcase with a suit inside and it was water proof.The human at the cash had a pouffe to sit on.He had a group of wooden statues.The man shook his head.It was Mr Route.I asked if he used a new shampoo.And he said back you better learn your attitude.Sorry I replied. It's alright.THE END!!!
ReplyDeleteOne day I found out that I had a big bruise on my leg. I really don't know how I got it . Had I tripped over a bottle of shampoo or something like that? I think that it was very cruel that a shampoo bottle had tripped me up but I had no proof. My mum said ''Where did you get that bruise?" and I said "I don't know." Then I noticed that it was a bit of chocolate pudding which I had been eating in a canoe. It oozed off and must have landed on my leg.
ReplyDeleteI have to put on shampoo on me when I am in the shower and hope it doesnt ooze everywhere , that would be cruel. then after my shower I had my tea then pudding after it. Then after it i decided to recruit some more people in my group for kitten club but i need proof that there nine years old.then i shook my head because one of my mums friend asked me if I wanted to go on a cruise with them.
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